We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

24.10.20

Encountering Old Bones: 2.

Encountering Old Bones: 2

(For episode 1, go back here.)


‘Human bone?’ I said, ‘How can you tell?’ Sure, the man was a doctor, but he was talking about bone that had been shaped and carved.


‘I’m not that smart,’ he said. ‘We found a note in his vest pocket. If anything happened to him, he wanted the rosary returned to the family of the woman the bone came from: the family of Lily Vallee. He was looking for them, apparently. But it’s no name from round here.’


‘That sounds like a made-up name,’ said Ben, the newspaper man. ‘A stage name, maybe?’


‘GRUESOME FIND ON DEAD MAN’ read the headline. As sheriff, I made some posters with the details. Our little local paper wouldn’t reach very far. We used an artist’s drawing of the dead man’s face; he never told his own name, but maybe someone would recognise him.


I locked the rosary away but I used to look at it sometimes, and even handle it, wondering about the woman whose body was pilfered for such a ghoulish souvenir, and the man who carried it. Was it love or revenge that motivated him? Guilt or duty spurring his quest for her relatives? Was he even the one who stole the bone?


What if it wasn’t stolen? Maybe it was her dying wish, a charge she laid upon him. Then why would he take it on – unless they were close? Lovers, I thought of course. Or … mother and son? Father and …? Brother …? 


Years later a new teacher arrived. She read the old poster still hopefully decorating the notice-board.


‘Did someone take it that seriously?’ she said, aghast.


A well-known trick, she told us, out where she came from. Skin someone of his money by whispering a ‘secret’ history about a rosary in the pawnshop and a family who’d pay a fortune for the last relic of a child abducted by Indians years before. Not a word of truth in it of course. Every so often some fool who thought he was clever would pay much too much for the rosary, in hope of a great reward. After he’d properly left town, a replacement would go on display. They were carved from the bones of dead cattle.




369 words, shared in Writers' Pantry #43 at Poets and Storytellers United. Many thanks to Magaly Guerrero, and to she whom we know as Magical Mystical Teacher, for the inspiration which proved to me I can write fiction after all! (It's a bit of a cop-out ending, sorry – but taking it anywhere else would have meant at least one more episode and I don't know that I have the perseverance for that.)


28 comments:

  1. Souvenirs are fine so long as they are yours and not concocted by others. Great story Rosemary.

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    1. So glad you thought so, Robin. I'm really enjoying yours.

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  2. Thank your for part two, I was wondering! Great ending.

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    1. Oh yes, it had to have a part two! Glad you liked it.

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  3. Emotions sell. Big business. But maybe the bone from that of Lily Vallee was not cattle....

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  4. I like the old-time investigation of posters and newspaper article with the artist’s drawing – no Google or Facebook back then, not even a central computer. I also like the way the sheriff handled the rosary and pondered its origins. I bet he was disappointed when the teacher told him the truth. But was it the truth?

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    1. Ha ha, some people would rather believe the fiction! (Oh, wait – it's all fiction.)

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  5. Dang. People do get creative when they run a scam, playing on the fears and desperate hopes of their victims.

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  6. thanks for the 2nd instalment. sort of solves the mystery.
    but did it really? there are always logical and scientific solutions, but we always expect something more exotic, sinister. :)

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    1. Really there were so many possibilities as to how to end it. Some of the others would have been quite complicated to plot.

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  7. Bwahahaha! My only regret is that the greedy man didn't realize the truth before he kicked the bucket.

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    1. Or did he have some skerrick of conscience too? After all, there was that note....

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  8. Never doubt your ability to write fiction, Rosemary. This was a riveting read. I loved it, every bit!

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    1. I'm glad you did. But perhaps it's more a disinclination to write fiction. I get tired of my characters and their stories rather quickly.

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  9. I sense you have the perseverance for most anything!!! Cheers.

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  10. What a story and of course I had to go back to read part one. People love buying a story and fueling the spread. I'm all in on a ghost story or dark tale. :)

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  11. How legends are made. Perhaps a small nugget of truth wrapped in a large portion of exaggeration. Or a prankster. Either way, this was an entertaining ride, Rosemary.

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    1. Or, as Rommy notes, a scam. I'm glad you enjoyed this, Joel.

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  12. Reminds me of a stiry i read a while back. Where the toe bone of a saint was revered as having mysterious power and people came from far and wide to a littke church to see it. Some even tried to steal it ☺

    Much💛love

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  13. Mysterious. Lily Valee intrigues me.

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    1. I wanted it to be discernible that it might be a made-up name (based on Lily of the Valley).

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  14. While the ending is not satisfying (I wanted it to be carved from HUMAN bone!), it most certainly is edifying: bovine bone. Ah, well...

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