We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

29.4.25

It Gave No Cause

(Elegy for Leonard Cohen)



The end came 

with a fall in the night:


sudden, unexpected, 

peaceful.


Busy growing frail, 

working diligently,


he felt the window 

getting narrower.


His working pace was slow,

polishing for many years.


A new set of tracks

the morning he died:


spiritual wisdom;

dark, self-effacing wit.


( ... after the event,

not to know ... )



NaPoWriMo 2025, Day Twenty-Nine. 


Prompt: to write a poem that takes its inspiration from the life of a musician, poet, or other artist. This is a found poem, in the form of an erasure of the article, 'For Leonard Cohen, the End Came With a Fall in the Night' by Ben Sisario, published in The New York Times, Nov. 16 2016.


Rather than 'find' and string together single words in a sea of erasures, I've used whole phrases from the text – though in a way that sometimes subtly alters fine shades of meaning.



4 comments:

  1. I like erasures, Rosemary, but haven’t written one for quite a while. An article like that is a good place to find a poem.

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    1. I don't do them very often, and didn't start out with that intention, but so many of the phrases in that article were so captivating.

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  2. Wonderful! I like the idea of a erasure poem for this prompt. Will definitely try it out next time.

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