We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

6.5.26

Winter Beach


Restless, the sea foam

flashes quicksilver.


Watching, I long to be a mermaid,

lifting the tangles of my hair

to the keen windrush.


Then the ebb tide

rolls back, long and slow.


The crests of the waves

peak like white wings

of skimming gulls


before the water, far out there,

smooths to transient peace.



Written in response to Poetics: Names of the Rose at dVerse. We are asked to include at least five from a list of rose names. I have used a few more: Restless, Sea Foam, Quicksilver, Mermaid, Tangles, Windrush, Ebb Tide, White Wings, Peace. One option was to make the poem about the approach of Summer, but here in Australia it's Winter that is approaching. I used the memory of a beach I used to live near and loved to walk in Winter. I also loved to photograph it.

















4 comments:

  1. I love the meditative flow of your poem - it felt like a moment of peace shared across the miles - Jae

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    1. Yes, I felt peaceful while writing it. I'm glad that was conveyed.

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  2. A delightful poem, Rosemary, which took me to the sea; I felt the windrush and heard the gulls.

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