We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

11.6.26

Re-Surfacing


From the depths of memory,

the wilfully forgotten:

wide suddenly, and full of light, this

window to the past, or

towards the past at least –

the past that soared, then swiftly flew.


Granite could not be harder than this

shore I’m wrecked on. Yet,

the harbour walls I thought I built,

white with age as they are, don’t conceal

sails dancing across the water; never

still, whether tossed or rocked gently.


Fly, then, sweet sails! Memory, turn

seaward at last, with the longing that is ever

seaward, ever returning to this particular shore, this

flying, with the wind behind us … remaining

unbroken after all. I can resist no more. 

Wings, spread! Wings, soar! Fly forever!




An acrostic based on TS Eliot's stirring lines from 'Ash Wednesday':

From the wide window towards the granite shore

The white sails still fly seaward, seaward flying

Unbroken wings 


Written for my own prompt at Poets and Storytellers United, for Friday Writings #231: White Sails Flying, where I invite people to be inspired by those lines, and if desired use them in an acrostic. Apologies, everyone! Until I tried it myself – after setting the prompt – I hadn't realised what difficult lines they are to use that way. 


My scenario is fictional, but based vaguely on things in my life: not one specific situation or buried memory, but some loves that didn't last, and a childhood and adolescence spent near water, 'messing about in boats' – though mostly rowboats and motor-boats. (Although much in love with sailing boats always, I never did any real sailing myself except as a passenger.)












14 comments:

  1. What a wonderful inner sailing and soaring - may you always remember the waves and soar high as a bird with your memories stowed - Jae

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  2. I love how you did that, Rosemary, and how comfortably the words sit vertically! This was a playful challenge for word lovers not for the faint of heart, indeed! :)

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    1. Thank you! I'm glad it appears that they sit comfortably. I'm surprised I managed to make anything the least bit coherent!

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  3. Not only coherent .. a peek, though as you say 'vague' .. into the marvelous mind of Rosemary the writer.

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    1. Thank you! I do enjoy revisiting some of my memories.

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  4. I loved the thoughts.The sense of positivity and immortality in the ending line is so uplifting - Wings, spread! Wings, soar! Fly forever!

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  5. wow! i so loved your response.... a lovely acrostic and so seamlessly fit... i could see you sailing away so freely so ready

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    1. Thank you for entering into the spirit of it with me.

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  6. I utterly failed to create an acrostic- you have just given me a masterclass

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    1. Thank you for the high praise! The choice to do an acrostic was optional – as was the choice to be inspired by those lines at all. I think you fulfilled the second option beautifully! I was unable to leave a comment on your piece, but I thought it was lovely, and that you wove Eliot's words in very well. Reading it made me feel joyful, as if I had been there.

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