We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

25.9.19

Colours of Music


In response to a prompt at 'imaginary garden with real toads': Bits of Inspiration ~ The Colors in a Song, asking us for a synaesthetic response to various pieces of music, I chose two:





Colours of Music

Jimmy’s a shimmy,
all colourless glitter,
or veering between
splashes of silver,
flashes of gold.

Then, when his guitar
screams along its cutting edge,
the noise is red, sharp red,
then ragged black, 
then piercing white,
easing down 
into purple haze.

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Ella is yellow
shining sunny. 
Then toffee gold 
deepens to mellow, 
softening caramel, sweet....

Now lifts into blue
as her voice soars,
swells and lingers, 
falling into 
a rhythmic fade:
pale yellow,
sunlight on water.

13 comments:

  1. I love your having Ella's color gold as the fading sun is seen reflecting on the water. To me her song is one of asking for assurance of her love's love for her, right to the end of her song, the setting sun.
    I remember Jimmie Hendrix fairly well, especially of his rendition of the U.S. national anthem at Woodstock (I should have gone) though many her took offence of his screeching guitar but it was super fine with me.
    You did well covering the two songs.
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    1. I don't think anyone who heard that rendition of that anthem at that time could ever forget it. (Obviously I wasn't at Woodstock either, just glad it was recorded.)

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    2. PS I hadn't heard of Ella before – but she has the same name as my niece, who is like a daughter to me.

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  2. There are so many delicious images in this poem it's hard to choose a favourite - maybe the toffee gets it though!

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  3. Interesting those were the two YouTube videos I listened to .... I love your colorful interpretations of both in one splendid poem.

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    1. I listened to them all, just loved those two much the best. (Smile.)

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  4. I like how both seem to be metallic - silver and gold. Both sparkle and shine.

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  5. I was at Woodstock and heard this. Your poem does it justice

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  6. It is interesting to me how the opposites in music can thrill one just the same! Awesome capture of both artists.

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  7. I like the pairing of Jimi and Ella in this poem, Rosemary, and the very different styles and colours. I love the way you’ve captured sound, too.

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  8. A beautiful pairing of people and color.

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  9. Oh, I love this! What a delightful pairing...For me it is shades of love some electric some muted, but together make a beautiful rainbow to live in. Thank you so much for taking part in the prompt!

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