Filling in the Blank
‘In the blank space
between midnight and dawn,’
she began, and I thought,
What’s blank about that?
Does she sleep blankly,
never dreaming?
Do the large machines in her home
make no white noise in the night?
She obviously does not have
a cat or dog or even bird
with its own nocturnal agendas
involving sound and movement.
And outside in the street,
do no vehicles pass?
No animals or birds
scurry or call?
Is the dead of night
dead silent?
What about breezes
or rain, or sometimes thunder?
Even the tiny night insects
and spiders about their business,
unheard by our ears, move
and un-blank the canvas.
But peace can be
surrounded by life
and does not require
blankness.
Written in response to Poets and Storytellers United's Weekly Scribblings #76: 'Writing a Blank'.
Rosemary, this is so nice, I love your treatment of the time between Midnight and morning. A little tease gets your readers minds going with their minds, drawing on experiences, wishes, and imagination. I too left that time space happenings up to the reader, just a little strange hint. When I did Aerospace Engineering work at NASA Houston we had to work around the clock if a mission was flying and for sure all the duration of Skylab . It was a little different than the other shifts.
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You've had a very interesting career, Jim!
DeleteIt is sad that humans consider the world needs them rather that the opposite. We really are the vainest of creatures!
ReplyDeleteI quite agree!
DeleteYour last verse says it all. I've loved the peace of being surrounded by those softer sounds, and never in my life would consider them a blank.
ReplyDeleteI like night!
DeleteWhat a gentle summation of midnight to morning. For me, I'm usually having a wide-awake around 3 or 4 a.m. and searching for some television panacea to put me back to sleep!
ReplyDeleteI usually read for a while in bed and sometimes don't turn out my light until 3 am!
DeleteThe questions kept a steady probing, escalation ~~~~ I wondered as well! A Beautiful BLANK!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Helen.
DeleteNight time is filled with activity and appears to have no blanks. Blanks, though, are so important, in speech, music, body language, and everything else too
ReplyDeleteAha, good point!
Delete“…peace can be
ReplyDeletesurrounded by life
and does not require
blankness”
No, it certainly does not. This is wonderful Rosemary!
Glad you like it, Rob.
DeleteThere is always sound (at least in my ears) but the night's quietness is so peaceful. Love your poem.
ReplyDeleteAh, we are on the same wavelength, then.
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