Turning 85, as I am doing now,
causes me not only delight, but
a probably quite unjustified pride.
After all, I have rarely given myself
enough exercise or sleep. Further,
I’ve been overweight for decades.
So it’s all down to luck, and genes.
Thank you, long-lived ancestors —
albeit I note, with yet more pride,
I’ve now outlived you all (all I know).
But being still alive delights me, also,
for many other reasons. Life itself, despite
its many ills and trials, is a source of joy.
There are still roses growing, willows
by streams, and river red gums too,
and hoop pines piercing the high sky.
There are sunsets, there are clouds
that look like angels, and mountains
which dent the horizon with bending edges
resembling resting warriors, or dragons.
There are friends, and memories of past
friends, including many cats and dogs.
Grievous loss — yet they are not lost.
There are books and paintings and music,
movies and laughter, my sons well grown …
I am blessed. I am richly blessed. I know it.
My response to my own prompt for Friday Writings #153 at Poets and Storytellers United. (Written 11 Nov. '24, the day before my 85th birthday.)
Happy (belated) birthday, dear Rosemary... wish you all those things that delight you and much more. Thank you for your poetry and your friendship.
ReplyDeleteAww, now I've gone all gooey! Thank you for yours.
DeleteWe have so much to be grateful for. Thank you for the reminder!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad it struck a chord with you. Yes, life is complex, made up of all sorts of sorrows and horrors, and also joys.
DeleteHappy birthday Rosemary and what a wonderful celebration of life you have treated us to. So many things to be grateful for and magically described - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear Jae, I'm glad it spoke to you..
DeleteYour poem resonates with a universal truth: life, despite its trials, remains a source of joy and wonder. It’s a touching reminder to cherish every moment, a sentiment beautifully encapsulated in your closing lines of profound recognition: “I am blessed. I am richly blessed. I know it.”
ReplyDeleteI guess such moments of recognition are part of the wisdom which comes with age.
DeleteHappy Birthday to you. You are indeed richly blessed and it makes us all happy on here to know that this is the case. You're very impressive for an old sheila or a sheila of any age in fact. Good onya luv !
ReplyDelete*Grin.* Thanks, mate!
DeleteHappy birthday and many more. This poem paints a lovely picture.
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Thank you kindly!
DeleteCHEERS to life, love, joy, memories ~~~ all of it, and to you, Rosemary!
ReplyDelete*Big smile.*
DeleteHappy Birthday, Rosemary! Gorgeous poem. This stood out for me:
ReplyDelete"There are sunsets, there are clouds
that look like angels, and mountains
which dent the horizon with bending edges
resembling resting warriors, or dragons."
Thank you! For the wishes and the comment. Glad you enjoyed.
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