We Goddesses of Shining Light – who do not
claim to be ourselves divinities, only
that we seek to embody, as best we might,
Her good qualities –
have been slowly ageing, over all these years
of meeting and sending out our love as light
to the whole community, and thence the world.
Now we’re old and few.
We no longer dance in circle when we meet,
nor sing to Her, but still we breathe in, breathe out
a flood of light, which first we see as a star
and then as our torch
beaming wherever needed. We have become
a small circle of elders, the grandmothers
who, someone on facebook said, are needed now.
Well then, here we are!
How will you use us, world, before we leave you?
That is not ours to know or even to ask.
It is enough that we meet, as do other
small wisdom circles.
The world has no listening for our wisdom.
We are wise enough to understand this fact,
wise enough to know our only task: send light,
continue sending.
This is loosely based on the Sapphic stanza (aka Sapphic ode). I was inspired by Rajani Radhakrishnan's recent use of the form. Named after Greek poet Sappho, this form (in its 'lesser' version) has 38 syllables in four lines in a pattern of 11/11/11/5, which I have followed. However, I have ignored patterns of long and short syllables which are also classically used.
Written for Friday Writings #165 at Poets and Storytellers United, in which we are asked to use the word 'torch' in a piece of writing.
Wow! This poem feels completely organic and effortless...I struggled with those syllables!!! Wonderful writing!! Wisdom, energy, light - the world needs all of it and more to get out of the mess it has dragged itself into. And the rest of us must learn to recognize the light coming from those older and wiser and do the right thing.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rajani. I thought your poem, that I linked to, seemed effiortless too. Maybe we've just both had a lot of practice by now at stringing our words together — even if not usually in this particular form.
DeleteI love the power in these women - the knowing and most importantly the light they hold - Jae
ReplyDelete*Smile.* I like to think it is available to all women who set out to consciously cultivate and use it.
DeleteFellow torch bearer! Never underestimate the power of planting a seed.
ReplyDeleteHail, fellow torch-bearer! I'm glad to know that!.(One of my greatest teachers once told me: 'You don't have to do it all alone. There are many others on the same team, including people you don't know about and will never know about, and some who have died, and others who have not yet been born.')
DeleteI like the form. No dancing around in circles anymore ..(.pity) I remember Nimbin. Should imagine everything has changed a lot up there now like the rest of the world. You're right . All you can do is the shine the light. If enough do , it has to make a difference.
ReplyDeleteI very seldom get to Nimbin, but can imagine some circle dancing might have happened there too. I am in Murwillumbah, which has always been home here except for a few years by the sea in Pottsville. I can't live too far from water — Nimbin is much too far inland for me.
DeleteAnd yes, if enough of us do ....
I like how you recognize that a large number of people are not in listening mode . And when we are, that it's what's needed in the future, not just what I think is needed now. Thank you
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you, for the thoughtful reading.
DeletePeople as torches! Lovely words.
ReplyDeleteThank you for all the light!
Grateful to all the selfless people who like torches show the light!
Thank you for this lovely comment.
DeleteAnd so many of us are grateful for that light
ReplyDeleteThat's very good to know.
DeleteThis is such a beautiful poem Rosemary, just after my own heart. "...wise enough to know our only task: send light, / continue sending." This is so true. Even if the world doesn't listen to us we must continue doing our part. So love this positive voice.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sumana. If it is all we can do, we must trust that it is not wasted.
DeleteBeautiful poem, Rosemary. I love your last stanza. I hope some are listening.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Yes, I hope so too.
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