We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

14.4.25

Around Home, Sounds of the Known

 


This patch of land which is my place –

my unit, my yard, my bit of street,

and, if you like, my slice of sky …

the view, too, over the road

to those blue mountains looming

above the houses opposite: a string, 

a ridge, an endless, undulant panel 

(where, if you try, you can discern a dragon

along the top edge) – is loud with sound.


Outside, the sounds are all around,

and varied. There's a hurried run of feet

along the bitumen street, pounding

with a firm beat. There’s the low growl 

of a car passing, or slowing for home.

On warm afternoons, the little kids

across the way come out to play

on their bikes in the driveway, supervised

by the watchful eyes of mum and dad.


Sometimes their big sister is with them.

Her calm, light voice intercedes between 

the little ones’ bright squeals and yells.

As night arrives, they trundle their bikes inside

with reluctant rumble. The street goes quiet

behind doors, while the lights come on

and the dark settles, widens. Now the sound

of footsteps moves, tapping, across floors 

of lino or wood or shuffles, muffled by rugs.


My cat stretches, scratches her carpeted post:

a long rasp of claws from each front paw.

Then she pads across the floor for her food,

which she chews with a soft scrunch. Me, 

I clatter utensils on the bench, making sure

she’s well fed. Otherwise she might treat me

to a long, strident miaow, loud enough to tell 

the whole street I don’t feed her well! (But then 

she purrs, while we snuggle in front of the telly.)



NaPoWriMo 2025, Day Fourteen, in which we are asked to write of the sounds of a particular place, excluding references to birdsong, and using a conversational tone and slant rhymes. (My slant rhymes don't necessarily happen at the ends of lines. I also use a few full rhymes.) 


I got quite carried away and forgot all about the stipulation 'to imagine the “music” of a place without people in it'! 



8 comments:

  1. i loved it from start to finish, but especially that first stanza!

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    1. Oh thank you! I'm so glad you did. I must say, I enjoyed writing this one.

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  2. You did get carried away, Rosemary, and I’m glad you did; I really enjoyed visiting your ‘patch of land’ this morning. How lovely to have a view of ‘blue mountains’ and a ‘dragon along the top edge’. I love that you wrote about sounds outside and inside, especially your cat – my two make those comforting sounds too.

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    1. It's nice to know you're a cat lady too, Kim.

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    2. Elizabeth Boquet14 April 2025 at 21:21

      I'm thinking you must have a lovely chapbook with a cat theme by now?

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    3. Now there's a thought! Thank you.

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  3. I enjoyed the music created with all the internal rhyme.

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