We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

23.4.25

To Lose or Keep?

 

Shape, I find, or line,

are what enchant me most

when I gaze at art …

then colour.


Best, of course, 

when all combine 

into jubilant, or sweet, 

or thrilling, or even fierce.


My dad always said:

if ever told he had to choose 

between sight and hearing,

he’d go deaf quick.


Agreed. But now

(hearing already fading)

I never want to miss

the full rich carolling


of the magpie in the morning

early up the street,

or the kookaburra’s

riotous chuckle.


The whipbird, the bellbird;

the high, celebratory 

trill of the butcher bird;

even the rasp of the crow –


these are the songs

of my friends, in my home.

I’d not be without them.

Please, let me keep all my senses!



NaPoWriMo 2025, Day 23. 



Note:

Aussie magpies are different from those elsewhere, though they 

look very similar (and were named after the Eurasian magpie which 

they most resemble). They are actually a different species from all 

the other birds called magpies – and they have the most beautiful    song of any bird I ever heard.



I'm sharing this with Poets and Storytellers United for Friday Writings #174, where we're asked to consider a time we had to decide between Two Equally Yummy Options. Though not written for that prompt, this almost fits it.





15 comments:

  1. I’ve never heard a kookaburra in real life, Rosemary – I always think of the song, ‘Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree’, which we sang at school – and I adore magpies, they haunt our garden, chattering. I’ll have to look up the whipbird, bellbird and butcher bird.

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    1. Magpies here are a different kind from what you know, though looking very like. Ours are not Covid – and they do have a particularly beautiful song.

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  2. I'm very familiar with magpies, but not all the other wonderful birds in your poem. I looked them up on ebird.com and they--and the sounds they make--are extraordinary!

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    1. Thanks Romana; perhaps you should look up our magpies too (see my reply to Kim, above).

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  3. May your hearing stay as strong as your writing.

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    1. Thank you! Perhaps we should be praying for the continued good functioning of my hearing aids, lol.

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  4. How lovely to find comfort in the natural world and to value it - life is about small wonders...they seem to change into bigger things - Jae

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  5. Long may you keep all your senses!

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  6. The words you chose to describe the sounds you so love are just perfect! Cheers to you and every one of your senses!!!!

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  7. Yes! "Please let me keep all my senses!"

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  8. Keep your senses tuned up. I would love to see the variety of birds that you name, and to hear them.

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    1. I am glad I can do so. And I am also fascinated when I read of varieties you have there which I am completely unfamiliar with.

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