Oh, I’ve got heaps to say!
Did you realise I’m two
opposites in one identity?
This is not always
well understood.
Call me fractured if you like,
call me split – one thing in the North;
for the Southern Hemisphere
in reversal …
my own alter ego.
There’s intrigue in being
simultaneously waxing
and waning (like the moon,
but not quite): joined
by shared time.
On Spring days in one place –
warming gently, shining –
in the other I’m
messy Autumn. My people
here smile, there scowl.
But wait! I’m more different,
even, than that. (Different
at the same time.) I can be
the golden part of autumn, or
the grey aspect of Spring.
Expectations vary. Take,
for instance, Halloween.
It’s cold only northerly:
darkening early, a good time
for ghosts and tricksters to prowl.
Remember your dead, instead
at chilly Samhain (Halloween’s
earlier, true name). Southernwise
I’ll then replace it gladly,
hosting warm, sexy Beltane!
Yes, my usual hobby-horse! I REALLY dislike the corruption of Samhain into Halloween, and the celebration of that Halloween on bright, sunny Spring evenings in Australia – where it's about nothing but dress-ups and lollies. (Also see my reply to Jae Rose in the comments.)
Written for Friday Writings #198: October Writes at Poets and Storytellers United. This October is quite long-winded! That's because I decided to do it as an acrostic – but with each letter of 'October' starting a whole verse instead of just one line.
wow this is clever and beautiful I love the comparison with the alter ego and I love waxing and waning (like the moon, but not quite) and had to laugh at sexy Beltane although I didn't initially know about this Celtic fire festival Great poem
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you think so, Marja! (I feared it wasn't working very well.)
DeleteLove this form...of course I'm going to try it...soon!!! I don't know how Beltane is celebrated (must google) but we have Diwali here in 10 months...there will be lamps and silks and sweets... happy every October festival to everyone.... peace and freedom and yes..sweets.
ReplyDeleteBeltane is a fertility festival. Which means those of us who are elderly and/or unpartnered must find creative ways to celebrate. But unlike Halloween, it is not widely celebrated outside the Pagan community.
DeletePS re form: Also I initially wrote this one as three words per line, but then decide to rearrange the results into five-line verses without altering the number of words overall. (Just one example of the games I play sometimes, if a poem doesn’t pour out readily.)
DeleteWhat a magical (in all senses of the word!) voice your October has - as a Gemini it made me smile a bit too - two sides to the personality and all. But the idea of celebrating the dead in on a dusky October evening sounds wonderful - I a imangining a peach melba sunset - Jae
ReplyDeleteIn Australia we have co-opted Halloween (like so many other things) from America, but with little understanding of it. It is mostly the younger kiddies who get dressed up and go out trick-or-treating, therefore they go out early, well before sunset – here in the sub-tropics where I live, the sun beaming brightly, high in the sky. Protective parents hover in the background, not in costume themselves. The shops appear to do quite well out of it it, selling costumes and lollies, but much of the community ignores it. Many people aren’t yet home from work to answer their doors to the trick-or-treaters anyway.
DeleteVery engaging acrostic. I really like the way you have covered history and heritage of autumn festivities in your poem. Much to learn here about how to write poetry in different ways.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteOctober is the transitioning month that lulls us into seasonal change but how strange it would seem to me to celebrate Halloween in Spring.
ReplyDeleteIt seems to me not only strange but wrong! (On the other hand, I have no problem with the Aussie Christmas happening in Summer, with a strange blend of eating heavy midday dinners and then flaking out on the back lawn afterwards to drink beer – or, as Tim Minchin sings, white wine – in the sun.)
DeleteYes, agreed, Rosemary. I am a split personality type myself and find myself hovering between Spring/Autumn and April/October, as the fancy takes me. Halloween was a solemn feast of the dead, a very religious festival, once upon a time, where people honoured their dead. Now crass commercialism and cheap thrills have taken over. Kids like it, and I sometimes get a buzz out of the creepy goings on too. Your poem works well!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nick for this well said comment.
DeleteGreat comparison with fertile imagination :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Anita.
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