little movement … near silence …
some melodic bird song …
a fly comes and goes …
I imagine
the temperature of the sun,
the feel of that light breeze
in my hair
This is a textu (160 characters including title and spaces) and also a found poem /erasure poem. My brother posted a video on his facebook page of leaves moving. (See, here, the still screenshot.) The first verse of this is taken from his words about it; the second from my comment on it.
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