We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

2.12.25

Everything / Nothing


‘Write your happiest moment,’ 

the teacher instructs. I fly – 

not to the birth of either child, nor

wedding their father, not graduation,

not even breathing freedom 

after two huge years 

of Wicked Stepmother – 

but standing in your arms

briefly … everything 

winding down to zero.



Written in response to Quadrille  #237: Zero at dVerse.

(A poem of exactly 44 words, including the word zero.)

And also in response to an exercise in writing teacher Natalie Goldberg's book for memoir writers: Old Friend from Far Away.



20 comments:

  1. Very well written! Zero moments are few and far between it seems.

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  2. What a peaceful feeling of finding just the right ingredients to feel just right - Jae

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  3. It’s so hard to choose just one happiest moment, so I’m glad you knew yours immediately, Rosemary, and such a poignant one.

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    1. The happiest, but fortunately not the only happy one.

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  4. I would not know of such moment, but such a moment would feel immensely happy in the rear-view mirror if it led to even more afterward

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    1. Sometimes even the briefest moment can be blissful.

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  5. A very real and relatable poem. Thanks for joining in.❤️

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    1. Thanks to you, Melissa, for having made it happen with your prompt!

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  6. A happy pause and then perhaps the need to exhale...

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  7. Wow! It leaves me so curious! What’s the rest of the story? Whose arms? I’m happy for you, there can never be too much joy in the world

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    1. Thank you; joy is indeed the right word.
      As for the rest of the story, here is a link to Rajani's review of the book/s containing it. (But postage would be expensive outside Australia. I do mean to get ebook version on Amazon happening soon.) https://rosemarynw.blogspot.com/2023/12/a-new-review-of-pentridge-trilogy.html

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  8. Oh this poem!!!! And this moment!!! I know it from the book. Yes!!! And now I have to find my answer to that question and write a poem...

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    1. Thank you for recognising! Looking forward to your poem.

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