‘Write your happiest moment,’
the teacher instructs. I fly –
not to the birth of either child, nor
wedding their father, not graduation,
not even breathing freedom
after two huge years
of Wicked Stepmother –
but standing in your arms
briefly … everything
winding down to zero.
Written in response to Quadrille #237: Zero at dVerse.
(A poem of exactly 44 words, including the word zero.)
And also in response to an exercise in writing teacher Natalie Goldberg's book for memoir writers: Old Friend from Far Away.
Very well written! Zero moments are few and far between it seems.
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DeleteWhat a peaceful feeling of finding just the right ingredients to feel just right - Jae
ReplyDeleteSometimes they find you.
DeleteIt’s so hard to choose just one happiest moment, so I’m glad you knew yours immediately, Rosemary, and such a poignant one.
ReplyDeleteThe happiest, but fortunately not the only happy one.
DeleteI would not know of such moment, but such a moment would feel immensely happy in the rear-view mirror if it led to even more afterward
ReplyDeleteSometimes even the briefest moment can be blissful.
DeleteA very real and relatable poem. Thanks for joining in.❤️
ReplyDeleteThanks to you, Melissa, for having made it happen with your prompt!
DeleteA happy pause and then perhaps the need to exhale...
ReplyDeleteIndeed!
DeleteWow! It leaves me so curious! What’s the rest of the story? Whose arms? I’m happy for you, there can never be too much joy in the world
ReplyDeleteThank you; joy is indeed the right word.
DeleteAs for the rest of the story, here is a link to Rajani's review of the book/s containing it. (But postage would be expensive outside Australia. I do mean to get ebook version on Amazon happening soon.) https://rosemarynw.blogspot.com/2023/12/a-new-review-of-pentridge-trilogy.html
Oh this poem!!!! And this moment!!! I know it from the book. Yes!!! And now I have to find my answer to that question and write a poem...
ReplyDeleteThank you for recognising! Looking forward to your poem.
DeleteA lovely sense of joy and peace!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you found it so.
DeleteA little piece of joy.
ReplyDeleteYes!
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