(the second five of a sequence of 20 10-line poems on the theme of dance)
6.
‘Me and Bobby McGee,’ sang Janis
and I slid around the living-room floor
behind my broom, dancing like
no-one was watching (no-one was)
and chiming in with, ‘Freedom’s just
another word for nothing left to lose’ –
my moves gloriously free, because
no-one could see them, not even me –
and shouting out the words tuneless …
briefly escaping my young mother-wife-hood.
7.
Two of my Capricorn friends
(I have a lot of them; it must be
a thing, that Capricorns work
as friends with Scorpio: they’re
among my best friends … but we
don’t have everything in common)
were professional belly-dancers
and teachers; but they could never
teach me, though they tried – I don’t
have the flexible midriff, the nimble feet.
8.
‘Work,’ said the hymn,
‘for the night is coming.’
I always heard it as, ‘Dance –
for the night is coming.’
When you come to the end
of your life, be that early
or late, maybe there’ll be
Heaven, maybe Hell, or simply
nothing. No matter. I want to
have danced while I was here.
9.
The dancing
of fingers over keyboard
of words in my mind,
the music
of sounds and rhythms,
the play of ideas –
poetry compensates
for all my lack
of dance,
of song.
10.
Gene Kelly in the rain;
Fred Astaire up walls
and across the ceiling;
Ginger Rogers with
that smile, that hair;
Cyd Charisse with her
long, perfect legs;
Debbie Reynolds
and Mitzi Gaynor,
perky sweet …
(Number 9 is a textu.)
See also Poems 1-5, Poems 11-15 and Poems 16-20.
The whole sequence is now available as a free ebook. To access it (and others) first go here.
Sharing (off prompt) with Poets and Storytellers United at Friday Writings #224: Just Desserts.

Verse 8 really resonated with me- I love your expression of the sweetness of enjoying the dance of life - Jae
ReplyDeleteMay we both have much dancing yet, in all sorts of ways.
DeleteRosemary, each of these is spectacular!! #6 is ME and the most intense, passionate relationship in all my life was with a Capricorn!! Lots going in Bend today ... Will return to read the others. 💓
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed, Helen; no surprise that you related. *Smile.*
Deleteyes, we all must dance while we are here. Loved the poems
ReplyDeleteThank you. So glad you agree!
DeleteThank you for this enticement to get up and get moving!
ReplyDelete*Grin*
DeleteI Iike your list and for me at the time lived a life to fit Janis. Her Bobby McGee and she still can ring.
ReplyDeleteYes, it never grows old (even if we do ... and sadly she didn't). I'm glad you have lived a rich and varied life, my friend, and that you survived and grew from the 'wild youth' part of it.
DeleteI can't imagine a Capricorn dancing. I am a Capricorn and I don't know D of Dance
DeleteWell, allI can say is that both my friends were excellent belly dancers.
DeleteThanks for the dancing greats in Verse 10, Rosemary. It brought back memories of their wonderful moves!
ReplyDeleteHank
Yes, once seen never forgotten.
DeleteI really like all these ways of dancing! But I especially love the idea of dancing while we're here.
ReplyDeleteSeems like a good time to do it, lol.
Deletebeautiful rosemary. especially #8
ReplyDeleteThanks, Eric. I'm so glad you enjoyed.
DeleteLove all the poems, Rosemary. Number 8 really stuck with me.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I really enjoyed writing them.
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