We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

28.2.26

Longing for Dance, 6-10

 (the second five of a sequence of 20 10-line poems on the theme of dance)


6. 


‘Me and Bobby McGee,’ sang Janis

and I slid around the living-room floor

behind my broom, dancing like

no-one was watching (no-one was)

and chiming in with, Freedom’s just

another word for nothing left to lose’ –

my moves gloriously free, because

no-one could see them, not even me –

and shouting out the words tuneless …

briefly escaping my young mother-wife-hood.



7.


Two of my Capricorn friends

(I have a lot of them; it must be

a thing, that Capricorns work

as friends with Scorpio: they’re

among my best friends … but we 

don’t have everything in common)

were professional belly-dancers

and teachers; but they could never 

teach me, though they tried – I don’t 

have the flexible midriff, the nimble feet.



8. 


‘Work,’ said the hymn, 

‘for the night is coming.’

I always heard it as, ‘Dance –

for the night is coming.’ 


When you come to the end

of your life, be that early

or late, maybe there’ll be

Heaven, maybe Hell, or simply 


nothing. No matter. I want to 

have danced while I was here.


9.


The dancing 

of fingers over keyboard

of words in my mind,


the music

of sounds and rhythms,

the play of ideas –

 

poetry compensates

for all my lack 

of dance,

of song.



10.


Gene Kelly in the rain;

Fred Astaire up walls

and across the ceiling;

Ginger Rogers with 

that smile, that hair;

Cyd Charisse with her

long, perfect legs;

Debbie Reynolds

and Mitzi Gaynor,

perky sweet …




(Number 9 is a textu.)



See also Poems 1-5, Poems 11-15 and Poems 16-20.


The whole sequence is now available as a free ebook. To access it (and others) first go here.



Sharing (off prompt) with Poets and Storytellers United at Friday Writings #224: Just Desserts.






20 comments:

  1. Verse 8 really resonated with me- I love your expression of the sweetness of enjoying the dance of life - Jae

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    1. May we both have much dancing yet, in all sorts of ways.

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  2. Rosemary, each of these is spectacular!! #6 is ME and the most intense, passionate relationship in all my life was with a Capricorn!! Lots going in Bend today ... Will return to read the others. 💓

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    1. So glad you enjoyed, Helen; no surprise that you related. *Smile.*

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  3. yes, we all must dance while we are here. Loved the poems

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  4. Thank you for this enticement to get up and get moving!

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  5. I Iike your list and for me at the time lived a life to fit Janis. Her Bobby McGee and she still can ring.

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    1. Yes, it never grows old (even if we do ... and sadly she didn't). I'm glad you have lived a rich and varied life, my friend, and that you survived and grew from the 'wild youth' part of it.

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    2. I can't imagine a Capricorn dancing. I am a Capricorn and I don't know D of Dance

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    3. Well, allI can say is that both my friends were excellent belly dancers.

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  6. Thanks for the dancing greats in Verse 10, Rosemary. It brought back memories of their wonderful moves!

    Hank

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  7. I really like all these ways of dancing! But I especially love the idea of dancing while we're here.

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  8. beautiful rosemary. especially #8

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  9. Love all the poems, Rosemary. Number 8 really stuck with me.

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