(haiku)
1.
harvest moon
great wheel riding the sky
keeps pace with us
2.
the moon’s face
smiled in through my window
all my childhood
3.
stormy moon
on a wild ride half-glimpsed
through shadowy clouds
4.
I’m with Omar:
Ah, moon of my delight
that knows no wane!
5.
after the night
I keep within me the moon’s
persistent light
6.
morning –
the moon sinks from the sky
into the sea
7.
dark night –
without that bright face
I’m lonely
8.
full moon
in a ring of clouds
gazing back
9.
daylight moon
ethereal as cloud
ghostly on blue
10.
the moon –
even in a sliver
fully present
This came from an exercise: to write 10 haiku about the moon, then remove the word 'moon' everywhere and craft a new poem from what remains. I did, but I liked this haiku sequence better than my final poem.
Sharing (off-prompt) with Poets and Storytellers United at Friday Writings #215 .

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