We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

2.3.26

Longing for Dance, 16-20

 

16. 


Young me wanted the Pied Piper

to come one night to our town, 

play sweetest notes on his magic flute

and call us all away – we children

who longed to escape the adult world.


What lands would he lead us to, dancing?

What fairytale surprises had always awaited

down past the end of the lane, out and away

across the fields and into the far forest? 

I knew I would never come dancing back.



17. 


The Seventh Seal 

ends – or begins? 

Death leads a line 

of following figures 

stretching raggedly 

along the hilly horizon:

black silhouettes

against white sky.

They are holding hands.

They appear to be dancing.



18.


When I was a little kid, dancing

was what I did for joy. I didn’t

even need music. I twirled and 

jumped and threw my arms up,

and went round and round and

kicked my legs and spun on my 

tiptoes, and of course there was 

always delicious squealing. Oh,

when I was little, I knew nothing 

at all about dancing, I simply did.



19.


She calls to me, my tiny cat,

insistently, with loud and 

strident voice. I pick her up, 

I rock her in my arms. She purrs. 


Her small paws flex, 

ecstatic. I dance with her

around and around the room.


Oh, I croon, the things we do!

The things we do, the things we do,

the things we do for love.



20.


What happens when the dancing stops?

Ring-a-ring-a-rosy, all fall down?

‘Thank you,’ politely and go separate ways?

Or, shall this be a new romance?


After the ball, do those likely lads

straighten their uniforms and march off to war?

(That has been known to happen. Think Waterloo.)


Or do we wind down quietly in the old church hall

while the musos pack up their tired instruments, 

and then all toddle home to a nice, calm bed?



See also Poems 1-5, Poems 6-10, and Poems 11-15.


The whole sequence is now available as a free ebook. To access it (and others) first go here.


The Seventh Seal: an Ingmar Bergman movie, 1957.



Shared (off prompt) with Poets and Storytellers United, at Friday Writings #227.




18 comments:

  1. What a great collection, much dancing to be found. I do have a feeling that it didn't end well for the children in the Pied Piper. Or was that just the rats?

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    1. Well it didn't end well for the parents of the children, that's for sure. Nor the rats. As for the children themselves, who knows? It did feel rather ominous, but we may hope they went off to a fairyland of magic and joy forever after. Perhaps not a good substitute for reality all the same, long-term ... but that's another discussion.

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  2. I love how you philosophise and memorise the world of dance taking me swirling and twirling through your stanza's I really enjoyed this

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  3. I love the journeying in your poem - your connections to the world at different times stages of life - may we all continue dancing but always nice to come home to the calm - Jae

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  4. I worried for the Pied Piper children but understood the lure. Spontaneous dancing is like suddenly laughing, an opportunity to let go and move to where the rhythm of life takes you for good or ill.

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  5. I played the flute for years .. it was magic! And remains so to this day. Like the Pied Piper you described so beautifully, whisking me away to all sorts of wonderful worlds.

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    1. The flute is one of my favourite instruments! (To hear, not play; I'm no musician.)

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  6. It’s really nice to see how you pick up memories from long ago, make them feel universal, and turn them into such beautiful, meaningful poems.

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    1. And very nice for me to read such a thoughtful comment; thank you.

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  7. Love your taking us through the whole dancing perspective of movements, Rosemary ! It opens up a whole new world for someone who is not schooled in such stylish rhyming moves. Wonderful take and very educational

    Hank

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    1. Dancing can be fun when we who are not proficient forget about trying to do it right and just enjoy ourselves.

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  8. As a kid I was the same way. I must have danced a little every day

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    1. It's a great way to be a kid! (Even when one is an adult.)

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  9. i pray we never stop dancing... the piped piper i always wondered who the heck was he and where did he come from and what did he want... after so long i've forgotten... google is my friend... the understanding of the german tale i have now... and i look at your poems so differently... im curious now gonna have to watch that movie it's been awhile.... i love to consider seeing you now twirling 'round on tiptoes singing a tune happiness flowing

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    1. I might have to watch that movie again myself, if I can find it. It certainly made a huge impression at the time. Thank you for this detailed, enjoyable comment.

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