We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

7.7.26

Guadalupe


The Guadalupe was green. 

Soft green, as if cloudy.

Not transparent, but secret,

glowing with inward light.


I sat with Anne

on large, flat stones

extending into the water.


The Guadalupe was green.

We watched three tall black birds 

forage, from stones in the centre.


We spoke of poetry, Reiki, 

friendship, and being blessed

to live in places of beauty.


The Guadalupe was green,

almost turquoise that night

alongside the wooden veranda


where our restaurant table

was full of new friends, good talk,

red wine, and feasting.


The Guadalupe was green.

He swung his truck to a stop, unplanned, 

for a river walk in the sun.


We laughed with a little boy, and 

a small happy dog … pretending we could be 

always ... knowing we could not.


The Guadalupe was a shade of green

I’ve never, anywhere else, seen matched.

Stranger, I longed to merge


with the depths and bends

of that river, to stay connected

forever. Perhaps I did.



Written for Poets and Storytellers United's Friday Writings #235, where we're invited to write about a body of water that holds a special place in our heart. I'm a river lover: mainly the Tamar in Launceston, Tasmania, where I grew up, and the Tweed in Northern Rivers, NSW, where I now live. But I've also fallen in love with some rivers in places I've only visited, most notably the dramatic Urubamba in Peru, and the mystical Guadalupe in Texas, USA. 







24 comments:

  1. The repetition works so beautifully... I think we are linked forever to places we visit...we bring something of them back with us and leave something of ourselves there...the web of nature, uniting everything.

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  2. What a beautiful flow of memory, delight and possibility - and I agree the repetition works wonderfully too! Jae

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    1. Thanks, Jae, I'm glad it works. (I'm never quite sure about my own stuff.)

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  3. I longed to merge- with the depths and bends- of that river, to stay connected-forever. Perhaps I did. Beautiful and that is what happens you become more relational with the river, with the world as nature puts you into a different state Beautiful poem

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    1. Thanks, Marja. Your words are wise and kind, as always.

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  4. I think you might have. Sounds as if it is in your blood.

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    1. Yes, it must be so – particularly as I wrote this 20 years after the events!

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  5. A beautiful poem and love the concept of using the dynamic waterbody as teh background as the foreground kept changing..

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    1. Thank you, it's nice to know when these devices work!

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  6. Love your poem and Marja's comment. Nature and environmental connections can hold ever deeper meaning when we feel our forevers slipping away.

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  7. I liked reading your use of repetition, for me it seemed to work very well. Subject material worked so very well as well.

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  8. Susan on the east coast have written similar writings about being confined at old age.
    https://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/2026/05/solastalgia.html?m=1
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  9. The repetition adds to the magical feel. Truly enchanting piece.

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    1. Oh good! Nice to know it had that effect, thank you.

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  10. What a mesmeric , wistful play of memories, desires, dreams and poetry. The repetition enforces a whiff of poignance to the poem. Absolutely love it's conversational tone as well.

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    1. Thank you, I'm so glad you responded to those things – particularly the conversational tone, as I'm sometimes afraid I overdo that.

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    2. I think you rock the conversational tone...don't hold back!!!!!!

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  11. The repetition keeps us focused on the water, and its color. Sounds like a wonderful, spiritual experience. You hold it in your heart.

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    1. Yes; all the more poignant because never to be repeated.

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