I remember the huge puff
that blew the dandelion seeds
all
off
to fly away on the air,
and you had to
get the lot
in one whoosh.
I can’t
remember why –
any of it.
Something
about love … ?
Do you think
I’m getting
old?
A quadrille for dVerse's Q251 Light Burst of Air
(A quadrille is a poem of 44 words excluding title. And including one compulsory word, in this case 'puff'.)
Something about love... maybe when it doesn't fill our mind the metaphor is lost.
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