Long-Term Love Affair
The world stopped,
The world stopped,
then changed forever.
Confronted by your
rare, incomparable beauty,
I was seduced
at first sight –
yes, I admit,
by your looks,
those mere externals –
the sleek lines
of your body,
your colourful presence....
I was bold.
We got together.
You didn't disappoint.
Such skilled performance!
You made everything
smooth and easy.
After each encounter
I emerged smiling,
not only satisfied
but further enraptured,
more and more
amazed, thrilled, infatuated.
Then, at length,
the rumours began –
the whispers that
you might be –
oh no, impossible! –
but yes: evil.
However, I'm hooked.
Won't desert you
(couldn't bear to).
I've grown dependent.
So I turn
the proverbial blind.
Easy to dismiss
all such ideas
of secret wrongdoing
in the face
of your loveliness –
changing with time,
yet uniquely, characteristically
yours, only yours ...
and the surprises
you still manage,
to my ongoing,
my unalloyed delight.
Once, with friends
around a table,
one of them
said your name.
She and I
and one other
spoke with animation
of your many
shining qualities, until
we finally noticed
other eyes glazing,
the bemused silence.
"Oh. Ah! Yes,"
said the technician.
"To you lot
a computer is
just a box –
to Mac owners
an object of
sheer, unbridled lust."
Though it costs,
I can't regret
that first bite
of the Apple.
Written for Poets United's Midweek Motif ~ Lust
You are so wicked. Bwahahahaha! What a glorious closing.
ReplyDelete*Grin.*
DeleteThis is so clever!!!!! I have noted that Mac people are well pleased with their computers.
ReplyDeleteIt's rather more than that. When we discuss the latest models, we tend to drool. I've recently seen the iPad Pro. (Out of my reach I fear, but) OMG, OMG, OMG!!!
DeleteHahaha. So beautifully and tastefully done. It makes me want to write anther poem about lust, admitting to the pleasure of the senses in most of what I do.
ReplyDeleteDelightful, especially the end. :-)
ReplyDeleteMy very first was an imac. Gorgeous bondi coloured. Oh yes and i remember back then the insinuations of its being evil.
ReplyDeleteWow!!!
Much♥️love
Haha...till I came to the technician...OMG...Absolutely delightful :D
ReplyDeleteThere is so much to fall in love with in life, comfortable chairs, cars, shoes, a 5 iron in golf, I even have a shirt I just don't want to throw away! As for a computer, I leave that to you! What a grewat laught this is.
ReplyDeleteYou're not a Mac owner, are you? (I can tell.)
DeleteLOL... such love.. nay lust we have for all our rectangular devices!!! Phone, TV, laptop ...et al.
ReplyDeleteMuch enjoyed Rosemary (comme d'habitude) ... thank you :)
ReplyDeleteSo delightful and the closing brilliant!!
ReplyDeleteGreat twist on the lust concept. I’ll admit I was duped. Yes, you Mac users are a hopeless lot! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh good, delighted you were duped as intended.
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ReplyDeleteYou had me there!🤣🤣 I share your lust for that beautiful specimen.
oh love this Love the surprise end, although I don't share the taste of Apple I fall for the general PC lol
ReplyDeleteYou got me! My husband is in this club and tries to convince me to partake.
ReplyDeleteNo regrets is best. Ah...the symbolic apple.
ReplyDeleteYes, there is a reason for that logo, which so clearly says 'Temptation'. (Smile.)
DeleteI knew there was going to be a twist, but you still surprised me!
ReplyDeleteAmazing
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