White whiskers against black fur – I miss her.
Such an elegant creature. I miss her.
She loved to play, and entice me to play.
I dangled cords, rolled balls for her. I miss her.
She climbed on the back of the old pink couch
to smooch me in the next chair. I miss her.
Although she was the smallest, slightest cat,
none had such presence, such air. I miss her.
She would seem to dematerialise
then suddenly reappear. I miss her.
At night in bed she'd lie across my thighs
(a lap's a lap anywhere). I miss her.
Not for food but as toys, she chased lizards.
Tough hides (and I) thwarted her. I miss her.
Indoors, I only had to tell her once:
'Forbidden!' – then she'd never. I miss her.
From a sweet little face, her piercing eyes
would hold me in a long stare. I miss her.
Both the house and the yard belonged to her.
She made that perfectly clear. I miss her.
She'd sit on my legs while I watched TV,
watch and listen too, and purr. I miss her.
I, Rosemary (Remembrance) forget none.
Yet let me declare – now, here, I miss her.
Written for Poetry form: Ghazal at dVerse.
A beloved and beautiful creature remembered so fondly!
ReplyDeleteOh, such a sweet cat. You must miss her indeed. She was very smart, to have to be told only once.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, both sweet and smart.
DeleteIt's so nice to see you really enjoyed your cat
ReplyDeleteThis is a remarkable ghazal and a heartfelt tribute to your cat.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely lament for a loved cat... those eyes are very very special.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, classical, and so poetic. You captured her here and told your love story..you weaved her habits and time with you like beautiful ribbons. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThank you for saying so! But – damn! – I just realised I missed the rhyme in the verse about the lizards. I'll have to go back and try to rectify that.
DeleteFixed it now!
DeleteShe's lovely, with her jet black fur and pearl white whiskers.
ReplyDeleteAhh, well done, very clever and beautifully crafted!
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely tribute. She was elegant and smart, it seems. I have cats now, and one in particular who I love so much.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I meant to add that I've very sorry for your loss.
ReplyDeleteThis is heartwarming — the refrain keeps on making it more and more emotive in every couplet. A lovely ghazal, Rosemary! :-)
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