We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

9.3.25

And sometimes it rains outside a poem …

 

... I want to say, to my friend who shows me

beautiful images of rain, beautiful words

for rain – inside rain poems, inside monsoons …


and I know they are real, those rains,

those pictures in poems; but I am inside 

the shell of my walls, thankful for light


(so many here now have none) as dark falls

outside, where rain has not stopped falling

for days, for long nights, as the rivers rise.


Two nights ago, on this hill, I hunkered down

pulling my walls in around me, waiting 

for cyclonic winds. They never arrived


and I’m thankful. Cyclone Alfred danced

and flirted with the swirling ocean, took 

his time coming to land, looked around


and headed a little further north of here 

than originally planned – a flighty cyclone,

a teenager, randomly changing his mind:


a playful lad, not a fighter. But although

he's not fierce, he's big. Even as, at last,

he calms and slows, the fling of his arms


casts rain clouds east to west, north to south,

day after day after day, night after night after 

night … while the winds hit places nearby,


power lines crash and tangle, trees are uprooted 

or lose their branches, as everywhere the rain

falls and falls, and all the rivers continue to rise.



Written in response to Rajani Radhakrishnan's 'Rain after rain after rain' post on Substack.


Shared with Poets and Storytellers United, for Friday Writings #169: Answering Writing in Writing.




18 comments:

  1. This is now the official entry for "Rain in Murwillumbah" and what a wordstorm it is!! I caught the "night after night after night" ! Hunkering down like that, just waiting for it to pass is not a pleasant experience...glad the worst of it is done.

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    1. Glad you like it!
      Unfortunately, the flooding is the trouble here. We'v had several big ones in quick succession over the last few years. This one is happening differently, more slowly, but could end up being the worst. I'm glad I live high up.

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  2. I love your use of colour and outdoors - it seems to reflect the moods inside of us and out - Jae

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  3. A lovely use of words. A tinge of anxiety!

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    1. It was indeed an anxious time, even as the danger gradually receded. And of course we had anxiety for people we knew to be closer in the path of that danger.

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  4. I liked how you turned the cyclone into a character. Feelings of being scared and vulnerable to an unruly and traumatic weather extreme is hard to convey but you expressed it the well by giving Alfred somewhat of a personality.

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    1. The fact that cyclones are given human names tends to lead to that kind of thinking. We hereabouts were all ascribing human qualities to Alfred before 'he' was done, particularly as the approach was so slow and erratic.

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  5. This brings us into the heart of the storm.

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    1. The internal storms in the hearts of those awaiting it!

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  6. The most vivid poetic description of a cyclone I could ever imagine! Thank you for sharing the fear / anxiety most of us land-lubbers will ever know. [thankfully]

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    1. Ah well, what else do we poets do with our experiences?

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  7. It should have been called Donald not Alfred.

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    1. But we're s till waiting to see just how destructive that one will turn out to be.

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  8. A lovely poem in response to multiple sparks of inspiration. Loved reading it, Rosemary! :-)

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  9. I am glad Alfred was a flirt, rather than true love. Great poem, Rosemary.

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    1. He did get a bit intense with some other people/places. But I'm glad you enjoyed the telling.

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