... I want to say, to my friend who shows me
beautiful images of rain, beautiful words
for rain – inside rain poems, inside monsoons …
and I know they are real, those rains,
those pictures in poems; but I am inside
the shell of my walls, thankful for light
(so many here now have none) as dark falls
outside, where rain has not stopped falling
for days, for long nights, as the rivers rise.
Two nights ago, on this hill, I hunkered down
pulling my walls in around me, waiting
for cyclonic winds. They never arrived
and I’m thankful. Cyclone Alfred danced
and flirted with the swirling ocean, took
his time coming to land, looked around
and headed a little further north of here
than originally planned – a flighty cyclone,
a teenager, randomly changing his mind:
a playful lad, not a fighter. But although
he's not fierce, he's big. Even as, at last,
he calms and slows, the fling of his arms
casts rain clouds east to west, north to south,
day after day after day, night after night after
night … while the winds hit places nearby,
power lines crash and tangle, trees are uprooted
or lose their branches, as everywhere the rain
falls and falls, and all the rivers continue to rise.
Written in response to Rajani Radhakrishnan's 'Rain after rain after rain' post on Substack.
Shared with Poets and Storytellers United, for Friday Writings #169: Answering Writing in Writing.
This is now the official entry for "Rain in Murwillumbah" and what a wordstorm it is!! I caught the "night after night after night" ! Hunkering down like that, just waiting for it to pass is not a pleasant experience...glad the worst of it is done.
ReplyDeleteGlad you like it!
DeleteUnfortunately, the flooding is the trouble here. We'v had several big ones in quick succession over the last few years. This one is happening differently, more slowly, but could end up being the worst. I'm glad I live high up.
I love your use of colour and outdoors - it seems to reflect the moods inside of us and out - Jae
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jae.
DeleteA lovely use of words. A tinge of anxiety!
ReplyDeleteIt was indeed an anxious time, even as the danger gradually receded. And of course we had anxiety for people we knew to be closer in the path of that danger.
DeleteI liked how you turned the cyclone into a character. Feelings of being scared and vulnerable to an unruly and traumatic weather extreme is hard to convey but you expressed it the well by giving Alfred somewhat of a personality.
ReplyDeleteThe fact that cyclones are given human names tends to lead to that kind of thinking. We hereabouts were all ascribing human qualities to Alfred before 'he' was done, particularly as the approach was so slow and erratic.
DeleteThis brings us into the heart of the storm.
ReplyDeleteThe internal storms in the hearts of those awaiting it!
DeleteThe most vivid poetic description of a cyclone I could ever imagine! Thank you for sharing the fear / anxiety most of us land-lubbers will ever know. [thankfully]
ReplyDeleteAh well, what else do we poets do with our experiences?
DeleteIt should have been called Donald not Alfred.
ReplyDeleteBut we're s till waiting to see just how destructive that one will turn out to be.
DeleteA lovely poem in response to multiple sparks of inspiration. Loved reading it, Rosemary! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you; I'm glad you did.
DeleteI am glad Alfred was a flirt, rather than true love. Great poem, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteHe did get a bit intense with some other people/places. But I'm glad you enjoyed the telling.
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