We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

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Old Scars


So many, and yet

over the long years

they fade, not quite gone 

but changed: pale and far –


no longer a spot of wrongness 

marking the smooth surface,

but a soft remembrance, 

less of breakage and pain

than a kind of beauty

or even of gain …

lessons learned, hurts survived.


In idle moments I trace 

the vestiges, finding not

disfigurement, no remnants

of any ancient ache, but 

only a strange, delicate grace.



Written for Friday Writings #188: Telling Scars at Poets and Storytellers United.






20 comments:

  1. Oh I love this and especially the last line "only a strange, delicate grace"

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  2. Yes...both physical and emotional..."strange, delicate grace"!!! I feel this poem!

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    1. I'm glad to know it came through that this applies to both physical and emotional scars.

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  3. Very well penned. Graduating from pain to patience to grace.

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  4. Well-written, Rosemary. Scars tell of experience and give us strength... And yes, grace too.

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  5. What a beautiful ending to this wise and contemplative poem - Jae

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    1. 'Thanks, dear Jae. I'm glad to return the favour for the many wise, contemplative and beautiful poems of yours that I've enjoyed!

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  6. Your poem reminds me of a time someone commented to me that I would regret my tattoos one day. I told her that I was already 40 years old, and asked when will I start to regret them? I realise that that conversation was almost 20 years ago now! I wear my scars with pride, after all I chose them.

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    1. Oh, so you should! I am even older than you, and am contemplating finally getting some tatts.

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  7. Love this, Rosemary, almost can love your recovery. As we age things also change.

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  8. That is a great attitude for scars of all persuasions.

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    1. It's just how it is for me now. A benefit of ageing, I suppose (there are some).

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  9. Scars from an adventurous life have grace. I'm not sure about the kind people pay to have done to make themselves seem more interesting. A good scar has a story behind it...dramatic, or funny, or cautionary, or even unprintable.

    PK

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    1. It seems almost commonplace these days for all sorts of people to have some 'ink' somewhere; no longer considered socially unacceptable as it was when I was growing up.

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  10. I love the last words of this well told poem.

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