(‘Tells with silence the last light breaking’)
Tells –
utters / informs / relates … and ah,
what Katherine did was relate
with –
alongside, in the company of … she was one
who was never away from, always with
silence –
absence of noise, deep quiet … she could be
noisy, loud with laughter, yet in her presence
I found deep peace; we could be quiet together,
needing no words (though, both, workers in words)
the –
definitive … to define her would take many words
or none; one could write pages of rapturous description,
which would have to include somewhere her laughter,
her huge capacity for joy – yet wholly fail to capture her
last –
at last, the end, finality … but there is nothing final about
this long friendship, sisterhood, true understanding, ever
light –
shining, radiant, illumination, clarity, the light of knowledge
… she shed light on the hidden; also, alight, lit up our lives
breaking –
coming apart, fracturing, dividing into pieces … separating
into past and future, self and other, here and gone, alive / dead
Inspired by a prompt from Laura Bloomsbury, for dVerse: Taking a Fine Line Down.
A word acrostic focusing on definitions of the words chosen. The line, 'tells with silence the last light breaking' is from Dylan Thomas's A Refusal to Mourn the Death, by Fire, of a Child in London. (To get the formatting to work on the blog page, I needed to put the words above each verse instead of to the left – which perhaps differentiates it from an acrostic, but I think it works as a poem.)
Rosemary - you have united the words into a very moving requiem of associations - a beautiful read.
ReplyDeletep.s. it's definitely an acrostic - no matter where the word is placed ;)
Thanks, Laura, for the kind words and the reassurance.
DeleteI had to put the words above too, Rosemary, as did other poets, and I don’t think it matter. I love that you related the words and definitions to someone special.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kim. This was good vehicle for me to express my grief.
DeleteThis is deeply personal and your words flow with deep feeling. 💜
ReplyDeleteYes, it is a very recent death.
DeleteSuch a warm and loving description of your friendship and I am glad that your connection still remains - Jae
ReplyDeleteLove never dies.
Delete👏👏👏👏
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteExpressing grief thru poetry isn't an easy task ~ you expressed it beautifully in your acrostic, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's useful to be given a vehicle. :)
DeleteVery nicely done Rosemary 👏 A tender and thoughtful elegy.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shaun.
DeleteI did somehow manage to put my words on the side, but it took some effort, love the way you made this into an elegy of a person clos that still lives in your memory.
ReplyDeleteYes, I saw that you managed that. I'm glad of your response to this.
DeleteHow deeply and profoundly you cherish your beloved friend in these beautifully wrought lines, Rosemary----thus the last stanza is all the more heartbreaking. May you be comforted in your sorrow.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dora, for these kind and understanding words.
DeleteSo personal, yet the feelings so beautifully and tenderly expressed, so universal. I love this deeply, Rosemary.
ReplyDeleteThank you; your beautiful comment touches my heart.
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