We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

30.5.26

Unable Not to Keep Mourning Her Death

(‘Tells with silence the last light breaking’)



Tells –    

utters / informs / relates … and ah, 

what Katherine did was relate


with –    

alongside, in the company of … she was one 

who was never away from, always with


silence –    

absence of noise, deep quiet … she could be 

noisy, loud with laughter, yet in her presence

I found deep peace; we could be quiet together,

needing no words (though, both, workers in words)


the –    

definitive … to define her would take many words

or none; one could write pages of rapturous description,

which would have to include somewhere her laughter, 

her huge capacity for joy – yet wholly fail to capture her


last –    

at last, the end, finality … but there is nothing final about

this long friendship, sisterhood, true understanding, ever


light –    

shining, radiant, illumination, clarity, the light of knowledge 

… she shed light on the hidden; also, alight, lit up our lives


breaking –    

coming apart, fracturing, dividing into pieces … separating 

into past and future, self and other, here and gone, alive / dead





Inspired by a prompt from Laura Bloomsbury, for dVerse: Taking a Fine Line Down.


A word acrostic focusing on definitions of the words chosen. The line, 'tells with silence the last light breaking' is from Dylan Thomas's A Refusal to Mourn the Death, by Fire, of a Child in London. (To get the formatting to work on the blog page, I needed to put the words above each verse instead of to the left – which perhaps differentiates it from an acrostic, but I think it works as a poem.)






20 comments:

  1. Rosemary - you have united the words into a very moving requiem of associations - a beautiful read.
    p.s. it's definitely an acrostic - no matter where the word is placed ;)

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    1. Thanks, Laura, for the kind words and the reassurance.

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  2. I had to put the words above too, Rosemary, as did other poets, and I don’t think it matter. I love that you related the words and definitions to someone special.

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    1. Thanks, Kim. This was good vehicle for me to express my grief.

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  3. This is deeply personal and your words flow with deep feeling. 💜

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  4. Such a warm and loving description of your friendship and I am glad that your connection still remains - Jae

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  5. Expressing grief thru poetry isn't an easy task ~ you expressed it beautifully in your acrostic, Rosemary.

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    1. Sometimes it's useful to be given a vehicle. :)

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  6. Very nicely done Rosemary 👏 A tender and thoughtful elegy.

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  7. I did somehow manage to put my words on the side, but it took some effort, love the way you made this into an elegy of a person clos that still lives in your memory.

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    1. Yes, I saw that you managed that. I'm glad of your response to this.

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  8. How deeply and profoundly you cherish your beloved friend in these beautifully wrought lines, Rosemary----thus the last stanza is all the more heartbreaking. May you be comforted in your sorrow.

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    1. Thank you Dora, for these kind and understanding words.

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  9. So personal, yet the feelings so beautifully and tenderly expressed, so universal. I love this deeply, Rosemary.

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    1. Thank you; your beautiful comment touches my heart.

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