I look at
my face, unadorned
in the mirror.
I decide it’s
a good face,
an uncompromising face.
All those wrinkles –
years forming – show
I’ve been expressive.
The hooded eyes,
small and dim,
are deeply knowing.
That set mouth
is not grimacing.
No, it’s soft
when you look;
but in repose
is still, closed.
This face is
waiting to be
aroused, interested, moved.
It’s not yet
at the end
of its journey.
It may still
develop new marks
of its passage,
of its involvement
in the life
unfolding around it
and the life –
ever new, unknown –
developing behind it.
Written for Friday Writings #79 at Poets and Storytellers United.
Love this
ReplyDeleteOh good!
DeleteWe are just work-in-progress...forever.. what a relief that is! And yes, good face, uncompromising face. Agree!
ReplyDeleteThank you kindly! And yes, it would be terrible to stop progressing.
DeleteI too like it very much. I think a "make over" is in the making. Next 'step'.
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Ha ha, I do wear a touch of make-up sometimes, but at 83 I am never going to not look old!
DeleteBeautifully said. I wish we could flash as young people in and out so people can see we are so much more than they see.
ReplyDeleteThat would be good!
DeleteThere is wonder in your thoughts and a future in never feeling finished.
ReplyDeleteYes! (Smile.)
DeleteBeautiful and true. A wonderful exercise, too. I think we should all take the time to poetize our faces, and maybe our bodies... to celebrate the lived experiences and what's yet to come.
ReplyDeleteLove your words (and face).
I'm glad you do! It was a first-thing-in-the-morning face (can you tell that's a pyjama top I'm wearing?). I confess I often think things like,'Poor old face!' when I see it in the mirror, but on that particular morning was moved to stop and take a good look with a dispassionate eye. Yes, I think all our faces – and bodies – and lives! – might be well worth such examination.
DeleteAs long as you continue to enjoy your life which you seem to do I think you still have a few cerebral adventures ahead of you. Keep on keeping on :)....Cressida
ReplyDeleteI certainly hope so!
DeleteI love this. It speaks to the ability to yet be intrigued by life and continue to be works in progress as long as we draw breath
ReplyDeleteYes, how sad if we did not! I'm glad you love it.
DeleteYes, living is an unfinished project. :)
ReplyDeleteThe other day, I went to the barber and said to keep the hair short. He gave me a GI cut, almost bald. Haven't had such a close crop since my army days. I thought it didn't look too bad either. 😁
Oh dear, LOL, hard to imagine. I'm glad it looks OK.
DeleteI became extraordinarily emotional as I read your poem, Rosemary. It is me, every-woman who has passed the age of (well I will keep that number secret) and each word, each description, sentiment FITS perfectly.
ReplyDeleteBless you, my dear Helen, for this heartfelt comment! I love what you say; thank you.
DeleteI love this, the beauty of life unfolding in our everyday life, with an attitude of loving ourselves
DeleteThank you, Jossina, for your appreciation.
DeleteSo thoughtful and so true! I love this poem! You have very mysterious hooded eyes, Rosemary :-)
ReplyDeleteThat last remark gave me a giggle! And I'm touched and pleased by the rest of your comment.
DeleteLove your attitude, and your face!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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