Her Garden
for Linda Lyberg
her shadow moves
through the slow video
of her garden
her abundant garden
greens the desert’s edge
her little dog
down the end of the path
runs to meet her
though the camera blanks
I can still see them there
(in response to a video posted on facebook)
This looks like a renga, because I thought it worked better with the verse breaks as they are shown – but it was all written by one person (me) and is really a two-tanka sequence.
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