We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

25.8.21

The last time ...

The last time ...


the last time

I ever saw you

neither of us

knew it was the last —

only the sweetest




Sharing with Weekly Scribblings #84 at Poets and Storytellers United.


12 comments:

  1. Short, but strong enough to make the reader feel the ache.

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  2. We never know when "the last time" is, do we? All the more reason to treat every moment together as precious.

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  3. And what a blessing! Too many last times fall short.

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  4. So lovely, sad. We often don't get to see our loved ones in death so our memory is highlighted at our last visit.
    ..

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  5. Wow, how bittersweet. Luv the romantic mood
    Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    Much❤love

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  6. This is lovely. If there must be a parting, let it be sweet.

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  7. A sweet memory to remember and cherish.

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  8. How wonderful Rosemary to have had an unforgettable last encounter

    Hank

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  9. How haunting and sad ❤️

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