The First Word
The first phrase, we are told,
or commandment if you like
(and indeed, whether or not
you don’t like – that being
the nature of commandments)
was ‘Let there be light.’
At least, I think I got that right.
So long now since I read my way
through the whole of the Good Book.
As books go, very entertaining
with sensational plot lines and
a rich variety of characters.
Even the most extraordinary
managed to have more than a touch
of the ordinary. Which is the point,
really, isn’t it – Jesus being
human too, or even mainly … I think
I mean simultaneously. But anyway –
Yes I digress. But so interesting,
all those wild old stories, and besides
I read the King James, which may be
a less than accurate translation, but is
in the language of poetry, which to me
counts for a lot. It rolls off the tongue.
So – if that was the first
phrase/command/sentence, then
the first word must have been ‘Let’.
Allow. Permit. Have it come to be. I like
that permissive implication. Gives me
a whole lot friendlier idea of Father God.
Poetic Asides prompt, day 5: Title: 'The first —'.
Sharing (a couple of months later) with Writers' Pantry #73 at Poets and Storytellers United.
Yup--although that Old Testament god is a mean one
ReplyDeleteAh this is wonderful fun is it not
ReplyDeletethe notion of the first word of permission is fire hot
belies the Garden and misbehaving punishment
Absolutely gives good ole G-d a far more humorous
and psst if I were to believe a far more compassionate bent
Love the poem and the sensibility :)
Mankind will always try to find a loophole in rules and regulations. Clearly Adam wanted to have his say and passed that on in his genes.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the conversational style of this Rosemary - very effective and Yes, let there be light! However you accept your God to be - this spirit is in every one of us...
ReplyDeleteYour poem gives some interesting perspective, and I especially like the idea of the first word being "Let". There's so much power in letting...!
ReplyDeleteMine is The Jerusalem Bible
ReplyDeleteContinue to read and be blessed
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I know other translations are superior in some ways, and some of them are even quite poetic (though others very prosey); I've looked at a few. Afraid I'm hooked on the sonorous King James, though.
DeleteOOOH, I like your version much more. Yes, Let. I think that's a wonderful idea.
ReplyDelete*Grin.* Glad you think so.
DeleteI've read all (most?) of "the good books". They all say the same things. That's why I have such trouble understanding why the world is in the shape it's in. I guess lots of folks read but don't always "get", eh? Things could be different. Imagine.
ReplyDeleteI too, Ron, have read the sacred texts of all the book religions, and also the most authoritative writings I could find about Buddhism, and like you I observed that at their core they all say the same. Maybe not everyone is reading and thinking about them.
DeleteLet there be poetry such as yours to grace our days, and fill us with light!
ReplyDeleteOhhh, thank you for that lovely blessing, MMT.
DeleteHow nice of him to let the rest of us, to allow us... permission is so nice. I love your description of the bible, my first horror stories were inspired by it, so I totally get it. I also like your interpretation of the first word. If more people focused on the "let" instead of on the "thou shall not" our world would be a glorious place.
ReplyDeleteI sometimes think the Deity does just let us be (or let us rip). Perhaps not always for the good. One of my favourite cartoons has a man sitting with Jesus on a park bench, asking, 'How can you allow all the wars, poverty and injustice in the world?' and Jesus replying, 'Funny, I was just about to ask you the same thing.'
DeleteAh... what a delight this poem is! Brings to mind "in the beginning was the word and the word was with God ad the word was God" The King James is my favorite version. At least it's what I grew up with I virtually don't know how to read other versions as I have almost never read them regularly. Biblical Literature was a course I took in college; enjoyed it a lot. I remember the professor telling us something like 'you have to pray for inspiration to understand the Bible.'
ReplyDeleteWhich rather calls into question the value of an instruction manual for living, if it's so hard to understand.
DeleteI tend to agree with Ron -- there are many avenues to the great I AM . I've never understood why so many insist there's is the only one. Let there be light indeed!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ron, too.
DeleteInteresting! I think of the "Let there be..." more like Star Trek's Captain Picard's "Make it so." More "I want it done, and I want it done now, and it better be done now, because I'm the captain and I said so" than giving permission! You gave a softness to the expression.
ReplyDeleteYes, it does come across as a Pronouncement, an Instruction. I'm a bit subversive....
DeleteOh, I love this. I spent years being a Southern Baptist and so many times I felt the light draining from me. I left the church years a go, and have found a whole new appreciation and vision of the divine.
ReplyDeleteIt's very sad how some people and some groups get hung up on rules and regulations rather than absorbing the loving essence of Christianity (and indeed of other religions too).
DeleteOh how I enjoyed this .... a delight to read on this Sunday afternoon in Oregon!!! I remember / vividly / the first image in the bible I read from as a child. I was struck by it. "Let there be light" with beams of sunlight raining down from the heavens to the earth ......
ReplyDeleteI never could get through that book but Let There Be Light stands out like a line from Shakespeare. I'm all for the Golden Rule.
ReplyDeleteI did get through it a long time ago, when I was examining all the great religious texts to compare them. Can't say I have yet got through all of Shakespeare, but then much of his work is meant to be viewed in performance and I have done as much of that as I've been able. He certainly was a wise commentator on human behaviour. 'To thine own self be true' is pretty good too.
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