We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

13.4.18

Friday 13


Poetry month, day 13













Friday 13

She is a bolting horse 
escaped from the stable.
Her bones are lightning, 
her flesh is quicksilver.

She is a swift arrow loosed 
to disappear without warning.
She is the natural curve 
of the earth, ever receding.

She is the anger you rediscover
in your voice, the shaking breath –
your own moods taking exception
to all and any comfort offered.

She is storm, she is forest fire, 
she is flood and cyclone. She must
pass through. She will perplex; 
pray she does not destroy.



13 Is Poetry, says Magaly at "imaginary garden with real toads", inviting us to choose 3-13 words from a given passage and use them in a poem full of metaphor. I had fun describing ... who? ...what? I didn't quite know, flirted with the idea of naming her Nemesis, but decided that, as this is Friday 13th, it's more like a promise that the old bad luck will get ya. Nevertheless the image is of Nemesis, I think from a game. It was made available for free download so I assume Public Domain.

My words:  disappear flesh bones natural perplex voice exception anger rediscover pass comfort moods breath



12 comments:

  1. Such strong words..long may she prevail

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  2. You worked in a very mythic feel with all of that imagery. That's a very exciting Friday the 13th you described.

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  3. 'She is a swift arrow loosed to disappear without warning'.. ah yes that's Nemesis alright! Such a wonderfully striking response to the prompt.💞

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  4. Poetry that sings of the child of my beloved Nanna is perfect for Friday the 13th. It makes me think of how moods and magic and miracles can be beautifully devastating, of how careful we need to be when we ask for them...

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  5. She is fierce,,,your first line carries me all the way through, I especially like
    'Her bones are lightning,
    her flesh is quicksilver. '

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  6. A bolting horse is very dangerous. Uncontrolled fear often does destroy, though.

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  7. Oh, this is great stuff, Rosemary. I didn't want it to end.

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  8. Emotions, yes they can be unfettered wild horses.
    Well done Rosemary

    Much🌼love

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  9. You rocked this prompt. Love the bolting horse metaphor. And especially adore the last stanza.

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  10. A bolting horse for a metaphor...wonderful. I love the mythic feel to this as well.

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  11. Full of power....My fav: "She is the anger you rediscover
    in your voice..."

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