You’re natural – but filled with wool, not feathers.
No swans died to create your nurturing warmth.
Your exterior’s colourful, beautiful.
I crave your embrace!
It’s autumn again. Welcome back to my bed!
This is our time. How faithfully we return
to each other, our long connection always
blissful to renew.
I remember when Andrew and I found you,
almost disbelieving our great good fortune.
You were such a rarity, such a treasure –
now even more so.
You have comforted me in my aloneness
now that Andrew is no longer here to share
my bed, nor share your handsome presence thereon.
Thank you, my doona.
The NaPo prompt this time was to write an ode to something ordinary. The PAD prompt dovetailed nicely, being to write a love poem (and/or an anti-love poem, but I ignored that option). We were shown some irregular odes by Neruda, but I decided on a Sapphic ode, extending it from a single stanza to several verses.
The love of your Andrew makes the poem a sweet cozy read -- like an enveloping and warm doona. Thanks for posting.
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