We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

13.4.24

Why I Like Living

 

… although I think my cat does it better. Still,

as I can’t be her, I can at least enjoy her –

that sleek, soft fur, and the long low purr

she gives me when I stroke her after she’s

just awoken, or at any time really. I suppose,

no I know, that’s one of the things I like best 

about living. And then, I like the scent of roses,

to stoop and breathe them in, deep and slow.

What blessings are our noses! Without those

versatile organs, we’d all be losers. But as one

door closes, another opens: the seasonal

flowers must die down now, in slow autumn,

before being reborn, yet I can’t be forlorn

when every new cloud thrills me with beauty, 

or when the moon shines full, or I grab a mango

and taste my fill. 


My friend sends a video of her afternoon,

in her new home, peacefully gazing at rain

through her picture window; in the background

Tony Martin and k.d. lang singing – bringing

her own pleasure over the streets and houses to me, 

where I’m alone and now no longer alone. Though

the tone of the day might seem subdued, yet I feel

I could rise and dance a fandango, springing

from my chair to whirl in the air, flinging wide 

my hands; or segue to a tango, imagining arms

that I have known, fond arms, holding me, bold 

and tender, shouldering a kind share of my cares. And 

if all I can do now is call on memory, still how I like

to dream and remember.... Yes, I like my living,

I like my loving: all that I’ve done, and all that as long

as Fate weaves, I will.



The NaPoWriMo prompt today was complex and lots of fun: to list words in several categories, then find rhyming words for them, and create a poem not necessarily in full end-line rhyme but with much sound-play. I ended up doing the same, as I wrote, with more words in the poem which weren't even in my initial lists. 


The Poem A Day prompt was to write on 'living,' which of course dovetailed beautifully.

It was very nice to have my poem featured out of this day's pieces at NaPo!



20 comments:

  1. I love that you began with your cat, Rosemary, an excellent reason for living. I could have written about my girls again, but I’ve already posted a cat poem for NaPoWriMo. Your love of roses really comes through in this poem, too. I also enjoyed the lines about your friend’s video, being alone and no longer alone – I know that feeling.

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  2. A WONDERFUL write! I especially like " yet I feel I could rise and dance a fandango," and the joyful dancing after these words. They made me smile. The entire write made me smile! I shall comment on NaPoWriMo as well. Thanks for starting my morning with a smile!

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  3. Rosemary, you did really well on the prompt. I like it every time you write of the cat, a lot on Facebook. Makes me want to, I will either get a cat from my life or my beagle dog. Thank you.
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    1. Oh, thank you. I'm glad you enjoy my posts about my dear little cat.

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  4. This is a lovely write, you've worked wonderfully incorporating all the senses. :) Congrats on the feature.

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    1. Thank you. A most enjoyable poem to write, and to be featured was the icing on the cake.

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  5. This is truly wonderful❣️one to be read again and again.

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  6. I love how deftly you use internal rhyme, consonance, and assonance in this piece. Well done and enjoyable!

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  7. Woweeeeeee a glowing whirling joyful testament to life - Bravo kiddo. !!! Hugs and love ❤️❤️❤️

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  8. I love that your inspiration began with your cat. My two cats Athena and Artemis have definitely inspired me. I appreciate your clever rhyme of fandango and tango, and your poem itself seems to dance.

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    1. Oh good, delighted to hear it. Yes, cats are very inspirational;.

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  9. That's the bottomline, isn't it...to look back and feel one has lived well and loved well..no matter what... beautiful, aspirational and also makes me a little afraid of what I will find in my rear window. Love this poem.

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    1. Well, perhaps the view from my rear window is selective, lol!

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  10. From Helen in Bend Oregon ~~

    "And if all I can do now is call on memory, still how I like
    to dream and remember.... Yes, I like my living,
    I like my loving: all that I’ve done, and all that as long
    as Fate weaves, I will." ~~ BRAVA Rosemary!

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