We who with songs beguile your pilgrimage / And swear that Beauty lives though lilies die, / We Poets of the proud old lineage / Who sing to find your hearts, we know not why ... (James Elroy Flecker)

22.4.20

After All the People Left

After All the People Left

The rediscovery of the spaces was less gradual
than a human observer (had there been one)
might have imagined. But after all, the cessation
of human noise and movement, the crowds of them
filling the spaces, had not been gradual but sudden.

First the dolphins ventured up to the very edges
of shores and wharves and jetties, explored canals
and the mouths of rivers. The birds, of course,
reviewed most widely the new stillness, revelling
in a welcoming emptiness, a clearing of the air.

Tentative paws and snouts quickened, came further
into the deserted villages, towns and cities, prowled
or scurried streets which finally revealed themselves,
now that they were not smothered in living detritus:
those useless animals that used to abound in them.

Those useless animals that never replenished the earth,
never respected their place in the scheme, the chain –
all gone, disappeared, silenced. It was amazing
(had any stopped to be conscious of amazement)
how the wind and rain so quickly cleaned all traces.

But the animals simply wondered, not in the sense 
of asking questions – but of wonderment, elation, joy.
Only the mythical omniscient observer might ponder
if some innate streak of forgotten wisdom or kindness
caused humanity to renounce rights it never really had.


This fantasy images human beings altogether gone, wiped out in some unspecified way. But it was of course inspired by the effects on nature of even our brief self-quarantining.

Written for Weekly Scribblings #16: Re-verse at Poets and Storytellers United. We are invited to use at least one of these words: Rediscover, Review, Reveal, Respect, Renounce. I ended up putting one in each verse.

15 comments:

  1. The picture you paint of the future is amazing, but also scary, especially the lines:
    ‘…But after all, the cessation
    of human noise and movement, the crowds of them
    filling the spaces, had not been gradual but sudden.’
    I love the idea of dolphins exploring canals and the mouths of rivers, and all those ‘tentative paws and snouts’ – I’ve seen newspaper articles and phots of this already happening.

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    1. Scary for us – but perhaps not for other inhabitants of the planet.

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  2. it doesn't take long for our man-made scourge to accumulate, nor does it take much time for the natural inhabitants of this planet to suddenly "return" - when we are absent -
    we see this now, so clearly - how quickly the fish returned to swim the canals or for the bird song to be heard again, almost deafening in the almost silence? waters clearing, air opening, sky visible - therein are the miracles - now, after the return - what will change on a more profound level, I wonder .....

    Happy Earth Day! (which should be every day in my mind, anyhow - but since we have an official marking of it .... may you walk lightly and with a wide heart, always)

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    1. Thank you for that beautiful wish! I am lucky to live in a place where we do at least hear lots of bird song all the time, and see lots of clear sky. I'd never want to live in a big city again.

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  3. The cessation of human noise and movement makes this imaginary world sound peaceful and a pleasure to live in for all other living creatures. But how scary a thought, especially now with the pandemic, that humankind could perish and due to its own doing!

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  4. This is a gorgeously epic poem, Rosemary!💘 I too wonder what might be going around in the minds of animals regarding the sudden changes in the world. And I wonder, what more will transpire in the time to come.

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  5. Written like a mythical omniscient observer, taking us on an interesting journey in a peopleless world. Fascinating write, Rosemary.

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  6. Nature will find a way. I rather hope that humans wise up enough to find the way forward together, but we shall see.

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    1. I devoutly hope that too. But not with any degree of certainty.

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  7. I love where you went with the challenge ... imaginary but backed with the reality of today.

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  8. Yesterday, Atlas Obscura shared a bit about "the Soundscapes of Cities Transformed". It's incredible how much our streets have changed in a couple of months. I went for walk--wanting to experience it for myself--and the sounds of birds were louder than the grumbling of automobiles. I found myself thinking, This is how it should be. So, yes... I find myself making the same inquiries your speaker makes at the end.

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  9. Sadly humans don't learn easily from catastrophe. I was amused at seeing a recent clip on TV of a kangaroo hopping across Victoria Square in the centre of Adalaide early one morning right in the centreof the city. He may have been a native wildlife real estate agent checking the use of the accommodation here for when they take it over again!

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  10. "Those useless animals that never replenished the earth,
    never respected their place in the scheme, the chain –"

    Really this is what this pandemic is messaging

    A profound ponder on our precarious world situation

    Thanks for dropping by to read mine Rosemary

    Much💛love

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  11. This is so true, Rosemary. Never has birdsong sounded so clearer. We even have deer coming into our parks now. Let's home we've learned how destructive we really are. Well said!

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